Mmmm. Always a treat -- I love the way you get into the trauma, the deep-down fucked-up that is the Ishvar war. Brilliant moments in both of these; Kimberly's taunting is spot on vicious, and all the little war instincts (especially the way Roy realizes that one soldier has snapped) in the second are achingly real.

Nice job, especially through the brain-fog of being sick. ^_^