...I feel kinda bad, because this didn't break my brain quite as much as it seems to be breaking everyone else's. I mean, it's really well done (I love your writing) and the attention to detail and the frenetic pace and the madness you convey... it's all really good. And hot. But... I dunno, I guess I just don't love Kimberly enough for this to be my favorite fic ever.

Still, very nice work. *hug*