I've found that ellipses or whatever they're called can usually be cut down to a plain period, even if the sentence trails off in your head. I used to have a problem with those too, until I savagely refused to use them at all. XD
Don't you love it when the muses toss themselves into stories where they don't belong? I'm just glad I don't have an Armstrong muse. In the middle of my Kimbley/Roy angst pr0n... XD Oh, the mental images.
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Date: 2005-02-27 03:37 pm (UTC)Don't you love it when the muses toss themselves into stories where they don't belong? I'm just glad I don't have an Armstrong muse. In the middle of my Kimbley/Roy angst pr0n... XD Oh, the mental images.