Absolutely adored these. I love this concept of them being thrust unwillingly into this hell, and not being able to escape it even they physically leave. I love that Nothing Will Get Better. And Kimberly's perspective on it vs. Roy's is wonderful. You captured his deteriorating state of mind beautifully. (I read the comments before reading the fics, so I read the first one with the idea of Kimberly being a hallucination of Roy in mind. It makes it more interesting and disturbing.)
One little thing that urked me, though: left you open to disgrace if you were caught. The rest of the fic is in third-person perspective. It's odd that this bit is in second-person. I'll chalk it up to your sick haze.
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Date: 2005-03-03 01:17 am (UTC)Absolutely adored these. I love this concept of them being thrust unwillingly into this hell, and not being able to escape it even they physically leave. I love that Nothing Will Get Better. And Kimberly's perspective on it vs. Roy's is wonderful. You captured his deteriorating state of mind beautifully. (I read the comments before reading the fics, so I read the first one with the idea of Kimberly being a hallucination of Roy in mind. It makes it more interesting and disturbing.)
One little thing that urked me, though: left you open to disgrace if you were caught. The rest of the fic is in third-person perspective. It's odd that this bit is in second-person. I'll chalk it up to your sick haze.
Great, great job! *hugs you*