When I got that request, I squeed like mad. XD "Knives out" is just the best Ishbal!Kimbley phrase ever. I could write a million things with it.
My explosions are sexy? Sweet! XD Always a good sign when one is writing Kimbley. (He's such a showman - all his explosions have far too much smoke.) I really liked the use of his hair in this one, too - I rather suddenly remembered that long hair HURTS when there's hard winds like that. So basically, glad you liked!
...I'm sure none of that was very coherent. I should really save the feedback responses until after I've slept.
*snickers*
Date: 2005-06-03 05:52 am (UTC)My explosions are sexy? Sweet! XD Always a good sign when one is writing Kimbley. (He's such a showman - all his explosions have far too much smoke.) I really liked the use of his hair in this one, too - I rather suddenly remembered that long hair HURTS when there's hard winds like that. So basically, glad you liked!
...I'm sure none of that was very coherent. I should really save the feedback responses until after I've slept.