Pft, my writing deteriorated badly while tipsy. I mean, I named the horse and the kid the same thing. Please. IT WAS ONE DRINK. I AM SUCH A LIGHTWEIGHT. But yeah, I like the visual of John in Genii clothes - I like imagining him walking into Atlantis in the clothes he planned to wear into his coffin, gun oil on his empty hands and a quiet little smile on his lips because he's still too detached to really be happy.
There's a lot going on in this story that got left unsaid because the urge to write it was too urgent, and I had to get it out in one quick rush.
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Date: 2006-10-10 09:15 am (UTC)Pft, my writing deteriorated badly while tipsy. I mean, I named the horse and the kid the same thing. Please. IT WAS ONE DRINK. I AM SUCH A LIGHTWEIGHT. But yeah, I like the visual of John in Genii clothes - I like imagining him walking into Atlantis in the clothes he planned to wear into his coffin, gun oil on his empty hands and a quiet little smile on his lips because he's still too detached to really be happy.
There's a lot going on in this story that got left unsaid because the urge to write it was too urgent, and I had to get it out in one quick rush.