Aug. 29th, 2005 02:12 pm
swordage: The Elrics being cute (x ed and al)
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I feel like starting a meme.

First lines are important - they draw the reader in and make promises about what the story will be like, what it will be about, and how it will be written. Write a first line for the character(s) of your choice.

He was a generous man - he had grasped a piece of his personal God, then cast his hands wide and shared it with the world.

The most erotic thing Greed had ever seen was a lady tugging off her opera gloves finger by finger until her daintily pale arm emerged, slim and perfect.

He was an actor above anything else, perfect in every glance and simper and step, but he hated every moment of the act and hated every breath in another body and hated how perfectly he did it all because she told him to.

He could never say no to something that bedraggled on his doorstep, although admittedly this time it was a person and not a cat - he could only hope he wouldn't be allergic to this one.

In the deep blue of night, when he dares to be alone, he thinks that maybe, just perhaps, he might be the only sane man in the military.

He can't help but wonder at the tattoos, at the sold weight of the bone and muscle they're attached to - he knows he shouldn't question, but he wonders anyhow.

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Date: 2005-08-29 08:05 pm (UTC)
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o.o Those are some pretty powerful first lines luv. *licks*

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Date: 2005-08-29 08:31 pm (UTC)
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Awesome. I really like teh Envy one, the whole idea really is insnaring (and I usually don't care for Envy), and the Archer one is very intersting, and makes me wonder how it would continue. I feel like reading doubt about his own sanity into it ('either they're mad and I'm sane, or it's the other way around'), although I do not know if that's what you were trying to get into it. Also very much like the description in the last one.

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Date: 2005-08-30 11:03 am (UTC)
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Then I interpreted it right. *dances*

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Date: 2005-08-29 09:12 pm (UTC)
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You = ♥ for the Alfons one.

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Date: 2005-08-30 01:23 am (UTC)
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Yay, allergies! XD

All of those are awesome. I especially like the Kimbley one.

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Date: 2005-08-30 02:57 pm (UTC)
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And that is why we love you.

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Date: 2005-08-31 03:13 am (UTC)
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And there's absolutely nothing wrong with that. XD whatever floats your boat!

(And just so you know, it's really hard to type over a cat. -_-;)

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Date: 2005-08-31 02:32 pm (UTC)
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This is completely off-topic, but have you seen this ( yet?

*too amused for her own good*

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Date: 2005-08-31 09:41 pm (UTC)
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lol, I think they're all really good ^_^ and I feel your pain karienta -_-


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