Meme

[swordage]

I feel like starting a meme.

First lines are important - they draw the reader in and make promises about what the story will be like, what it will be about, and how it will be written. Write a first line for the character(s) of your choice.

Kimbley
He was a generous man - he had grasped a piece of his personal God, then cast his hands wide and shared it with the world.

Greed
The most erotic thing Greed had ever seen was a lady tugging off her opera gloves finger by finger until her daintily pale arm emerged, slim and perfect.

Envy
He was an actor above anything else, perfect in every glance and simper and step, but he hated every moment of the act and hated every breath in another body and hated how perfectly he did it all because she told him to.

Heiderich
He could never say no to something that bedraggled on his doorstep, although admittedly this time it was a person and not a cat - he could only hope he wouldn't be allergic to this one.

Archer
In the deep blue of night, when he dares to be alone, he thinks that maybe, just perhaps, he might be the only sane man in the military.

Leo
He can't help but wonder at the tattoos, at the sold weight of the bone and muscle they're attached to - he knows he shouldn't question, but he wonders anyhow.

Comments

[severed-sanity.livejournal.com]

o.o Those are some pretty powerful first lines luv. *licks*

[swordage]

I think my favorite part is all the potential. X3 I could do better, but these are pretty nice. I keep thinking of more, for Tucker and the Elrics and...

[theburrahobbit.livejournal.com]

Awesome. I really like teh Envy one, the whole idea really is insnaring (and I usually don't care for Envy), and the Archer one is very intersting, and makes me wonder how it would continue. I feel like reading doubt about his own sanity into it ('either they're mad and I'm sane, or it's the other way around'), although I do not know if that's what you were trying to get into it. Also very much like the description in the last one.

[swordage]

X3 That is what I was going for with Archer - just some kind of play with sanity and the definition thereof. Heh, I'm glad you liked them!

[theburrahobbit.livejournal.com]

Then I interpreted it right. *dances*

[hime1999.livejournal.com]

You = ♥ for the Alfons one.

[swordage]

Eeeee! ♥ I like the lines you wrote so much better, though. ^^;

[karienta.livejournal.com]

Yay, allergies! XD

All of those are awesome. I especially like the Kimbley one.

[swordage]

*eyes you suspiciously and snuffles* I liked that one too, but I should really try non-Ishbal Kimbley sometime. All I write is Ishbal, Greed/Kimbley, alchemy perving, gorey sex, and skullsex.

[pinstripesuit.livejournal.com]

And that is why we love you.

[karienta.livejournal.com]

And there's absolutely nothing wrong with that. XD whatever floats your boat!

(And just so you know, it's really hard to type over a cat. -_-;)

[karienta.livejournal.com]

This is completely off-topic, but have you seen this (http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y253/RWGrimm/ctucker.jpg) yet?

*too amused for her own good*

[swordage]

I imagine if someone had to use those, they would never have sex again.

[allegratheneko.livejournal.com]

lol, I think they're all really good ^_^ and I feel your pain karienta -_-